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Um, okay! So since I have so many wonderful followers, I decided to post some of my projects every now and then, as well as works in progress. I would LOVE some feedback and critique - HONEST, BRUTAL, HELPFUL CRITIQUE. I want to learn! Compliments are always wonderful if you like something, but in no way will you hurt my feelings if you point out something wrong or something that needs improvement, or even ideas of yours.
So this is for my Flash scripting class. It’s an interactive page on a fictional webpage to advertise or educate the viewer about a product or place or thing or whatever. This is actually the first time (other than the Joltik from a few days back) that I’ve incorporated anything video game related into my portfolio! ;;; But my professor liked the idea, so I’m gonna be brave! >:D
We had to use a grid design to make sure everything looks like it flows nice, and is aesthetically pleasing. What do you guys think? I’m also going to be putting a sub page that shows off the inner schematics of a Pokeball, but I’m not sure where to put it. ;;;
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Um, okay! So since I have so many wonderful followers, I decided to post some of my projects every now and then, as well as works in progress. I would LOVE some feedback and critique - HONEST, BRUTAL, HELPFUL CRITIQUE. I want to learn! Compliments are always wonderful if you like something, but in no way will you hurt my feelings if you point out something wrong or something that needs improvement, or even ideas of yours.

So this is for my Flash scripting class. It’s an interactive page on a fictional webpage to advertise or educate the viewer about a product or place or thing or whatever. This is actually the first time (other than the Joltik from a few days back) that I’ve incorporated anything video game related into my portfolio! ;;; But my professor liked the idea, so I’m gonna be brave! >:D

We had to use a grid design to make sure everything looks like it flows nice, and is aesthetically pleasing. What do you guys think? I’m also going to be putting a sub page that shows off the inner schematics of a Pokeball, but I’m not sure where to put it. ;;;